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The white, posterless classroom was painfully familiar to you. It was your first year at Hetalia High School, and your teachers were possibly the most boring ones you had ever encountered. You laid your head down on your wooden desk, hoping sleep would help pass the time.

This high school wasn't completely boring though. What it lacked in teachers, it more than made up in the students. They were the only reason you dealt with the school, and somewhere along the way you had managed to befriend the most popular ones: Gilbert, Antonio, and Francis. They had some strange tendencies, like constantly going to the nurse's office or being absent on days that the moon was full, but they were always fun to hang out with.

You heard the bell ring, and ridiculously loud noise come your way. If you speak of the devil, he shall appear…

"Hey, (name)! Do you want to go on a haunted trail with the awesome me?" A certain friend with blood-red eyes asked. You lifted your head off the desk and smiled, always up for a night out with your best friends.

"But it's Halloween! Isn't it going to be busy?" Gilbert laughed, and you heard someone walking up behind you.

"Nope! I found an actual haunted trail! Nothing less than expected of the awesome me!" Before you could reply, you felt someone blow on the back of your neck.
Not missing your cue, you jumped.

"Francis! How many time have I asked you not to do that?!" The blonde grinned, exposing his unusually sharp canine teeth, enjoying the reaction he got.

"I've lost count by now, mon cherie." You rolled your eyes, used to his animal-like behavior. At least you weren't bored now. Reluctantly, you finally returned Francis's smile.

'Well, Gilbert and Francis are here. It's only a matter of time…' As if responding to your thoughts, you saw Antonio coming towards you in your peripheral vision.
For some reason, the Spaniard always had a number of large, deep bruises, even though he never played sports. They only slowed him down because he had to go to the nurse's office at least once a day.

1"Hola, cómo estás mi amiga?" Gilbert and Francis refused to learn Spanish, so this greeting was somewhat a way to annoy your much-love friends.

2 "Bien, y tú?" Antonio and I snickered, watching the rest of our friends glare at us.

"(Name), speaking in Spanish is totally unawesome! Why don't you learn German instead?" Gilbert looked mortally offended, as usual. He had a huge ego, so it was easy to find his weak spots.

"Or why don't you learn French, mi amour? It's the language of love~" Francis purred, leaning closer to your face.

"I'm not learning German or French because it's so funny to watch you guys get mad! Anyway, how about we ditch this place and go to my house to watch horror movies until it gets dark? That way we can all see Gilbert's so-called haunted trail." You grinned as you watched Gilbert's and Francis's faces fall in defeat, grumbling about why you were always making fun of them.

Soon enough though, you managed to get every member of The Bad Touch Trio into their cars and follow you to your house.

Alone in your car, you were able to get excited about the night to come. It was probably going to be the best night of the year, considering your love of scary things.

Finally, after about a thirty minute drive, you arrived home. You parked your car in the driveway; glad you had room enough for all four cars.

"Wow (Name), you live all the way out here alone? Mi amiga, you must get lonely. You should have us visit more often." Antonio got out of his car, followed by Francis and Gilbert.

"Trust me, I never get lonely. Besides, we have other stuff to do than decide if you need to visit or not." You walked to your front door, unlocking it. "Come in, let's see how many horror movies we can watch until it's time for the haunted trail!" With that, the guys followed you inside.

*~Time Skip to arriving at the trail~*

"Wow. This actually is awesome Gilbert!" you cried, walking into the eerily quiet entrance.

"Of course it is frau! If I discovered it, it naturally has to be awesome!" You rolled your eyes again, noticing they were starting to adjust to the darkness.
The haunted trail seemed to be an abandoned trail to nowhere in particular. It was in the middle of the woods, but all of the trees surrounding the area had, for some reason, already lost all of their leaves. There wasn't any life in the forest as far as you could tell, and that made things more exciting. You were sure that you'd see real monsters tonight.

You heard the guys whispering behind you, but you ignored it. Instead, you stepped onto the trail.

"Are you chickening out now boys?" You asked, hearing the dead leaves crunch under your feet. "Do you want me to drive you home to your mom's?" You teased. Unsurprisingly, that got their attention. All three of them automatically denied your request, their voices sounding like a huge jumble of words.  

Before you could tease them more, they came up to you. Gilbert and Antonio on one side, Francis on the other. The four of you started the trail, talking along the way.

"You know, mon cherie, the woods are a dangerous place. Let's hope we don't run into anything scarier than us in here! You might have to cling to me~" Francis chimed, grinning. His teeth seemed to glow in the moonlight.

"Kesesese! I think (Name) would be clinging to the awesome me!" You rolled your eyes, listening to what Antonio was bound to say.

"I don't think so. The lovely (Name) is definitely going to cling to me as if her very life depended one it." Instead of carrying on the argument, Gilbert, Antonio, and Francis stopped.

In front of you was a part of the trail with fewer trees, allowing the light of the full moon to touch the earth. You walked into, turning around to stare at your friends.

"What's wrong? Are you guys scared of the moon or something?" None of them responded to your question, instead talking to each other.

"I guess all love must eventually come to an end…"

"The question is, what are we going to do with this pretty senorita?"

"Kesesesese! If we let you have her, Antonio, she won't be pretty anymore!"

"Let's decide later. I think (Name) needs an explanation, no?"

By this part of the conversation, you had backed away to the edge of the small clearing. Curiosity held you there, along with all three of the guy's intense stares.

"We're sorry it has to end like this, mi amour, you really are a good friend. But we came here to find food, you see." Francis sighed, looking up at the full moon. "Well, let's show her. It's not like she can outrun us, or even hide."

They stepped out into the moonlight, changing drastically. Gilbert's canines grew, getting sharper and longer; finally stopping when they reached his lower lip. Antonio's bruises grew at an alarming rate, his skin looking dead and grey. Francis changed the most, fur exploding all over his body, and his head changing into that of a wolf's.

You turned your back on them and bolted.

Something close to adrenaline coursed through your veins, and you ran faster than any of them had expected you to. Even so, you could hear all three of them gaining on you. Yes, three. Who knew zombies could be fast?  

After what seemed to be a few minutes of running, you reached a dead end. You knew that you presently lived close to a mountain, but you never knew that it was this close. You turned around, watching the Bad Touch Trio emerge from the woods.

"Well, guys, I'm afraid that this is going to be our last time playing nicely together. Because you know what? I came to this town looking for food too."  All three of them looked at you blankly, probably wondering if what you just said was a trick.

"What do you mean? You're just a helpless little…" Gilbert stopped talking, all three pairs of eyes widening.

You grinned; licking your sharpened teeth and feeling other changes take place. You didn't normally show your true form to your prey, but you felt your brethren deserved it. Sadly for them, this would be the last thing they'd ever see. You laughed maniacally.

"I'll see you in hell boys."

****

In a different town, you set down the newspaper that listed four missing teenagers, sighing. Vampires, werewolves, and zombies tasted good, but they still weren't even in the same running as humans.
Well, this is probably the first scary/creepy story I've ever done. Savor it, because I don't think I'll be writing another one. Too weird for my personality. :/ Tell me if I did okay on this one though!

1. Hello, how are you my friend?
2. Good, and you?

Bad Touch Trio (c) Hidekaz Himaruya

Plot (c) Me

You (c) You


Edit: Thanks for so many favorites so quickly! You guys are so cool! And I'll try and thank everyone who favorites or comments personally, but please forgive me if I don't get to you!

Edit 2: Since I've been getting a lot of comments on this asking what the reader is in the story, I'll explain here. Basically you're a monster (demon if you prefer) in disguise who is stronger than vampires, zombies, and werewolves combined. You normally prey on humans, but this time you made an exception.
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novadragonheart81 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014   Writer
Heh heh, sorry if that shocked you! ;) (Wink)  It's kind of a cool twist though, at least for Halloween (when I posted it).
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novadragonheart81 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
No, s'okay. This was very well written. :iconthumbsupplz:
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014   Writer
Thanks!
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Konekokitty13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Oh mein got!! I just ate mein bruder!!!!
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013   Writer
Heh heh, sorry it turned out that way!
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Konekokitty13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
U.U ill never be able to explian zat to mein mutter... U-U'
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013   Writer
I know, but there must be some way! Perhaps you can go into the underworld und retrieve your bruder.
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Konekokitty13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Meine mutter is going to kill me... O.O'
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Alli881 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
I loved this! Very nice. I love dark stories.
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013   Writer
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Alli881 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
I did... Very nice *brofist*
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013   Writer
*brofist*
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Canadagirlhetalia Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wait what am i??
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013   Writer
Well, you're a monster that is more powerful than werewolves, zombies, and vampires combined! A demon, if you will.
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lyla898989 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Student General Artist
A demon hound perhaps?
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014   Writer
Yeah, sure! I think as long as it's more powerful, it's fair game! :D
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lyla898989 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Seen Black Butler? Heard of the character called Pluto? He's a demon hound, and my favorite!
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014   Writer
Oh, yeah, I've seen that! It's been a pretty long time, but if I remember correctly, he's TOTALLY able to beat up vampires and the like!
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lyla898989 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Yep!
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Canadagirlhetalia Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AWESOME!!!
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013   Writer
Well, thank you!
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Canadagirlhetalia Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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Jyynx11 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Wait, I'm confused. Did I turn into something? Or did I murder them with my awesomeness?
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Writer
Well, the twist is that you were a monster all along (whatever kind you prefer; just more powerful than zombies, vampires, and werewolves combined) and you killed the monsters who were planning to kill you. So yeah, you could say that you killed them with your awesomeness!
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Jyynx11 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Awesome! Wait... I just killed three incredibly hot men... Oh well. They tasted good! (^.^)
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
Aiyah....I ate my buddies :(
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AskDarkJordan Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
I Mean i didnt want ot kill them they where my best friends... imeanineverthoughtiwoulf see them in hell! Its was good and sorry got the rapid talking.
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012   Writer
Thank you! And no problem about the rapid talking!
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AskDarkJordan Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
Im random when it comes to reading BTT Stories.. I Love all three~
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
FINALLY! I'm the killed^^ hehe aww but I killed mi hermano, papa, and Gil *sighs* Oh well. I love them even if I had to devour them hehe~!
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012   Writer
I'm glad you liked it!
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
^^ it was cool/Awesome^^
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012   Writer
Thanks!
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
^^ welcome~ I hope you write more like this~
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012   Writer
Well, we'll see! I might get another evil genius idea when next Halloween rolls around.
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
It may come sooner~ but it would be cool^^
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hetaliais Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student Writer
so what? I can be worse than satan when I'm angry
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Sensuru-Chan Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good!
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012   Writer
Thanks!
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Hetalia-Fangirl-98 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Epic~
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012   Writer
Thank yo!
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wolf-girl246 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
i really like the story but what are you
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012   Writer
Thanks! Well, you're probably some sort of EXTREMELY powerful demon.
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wolf-girl246 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
well fair engough
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ratjay Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
...Never thought I would use my Spanish class knowledge for fan fiction.
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
XD epicz! (i think i'll do a halloween fic [later though im being lazy] hmmm idk who to write it about ill think of something :P but for fucking sure there will be some epic monsters in it! an i'll try my hardest to beat ur awesome story with an even more awesome one! [maybe even some lime/lemon will be thrown in there XD] )
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shanpam13 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012   Writer
Thanks! I can't wait to see your awesome story! May the most epic win!
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
yes! XD
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dezilu Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Awesome story I ALMOST jizzed in my pants but still I bet they were delicious x3
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